核心畫面

Watch a dancer cross a stage: every step runs into the next and nothing looks like work. That ease is grace. Graceless can be thought of as the same scene with the ease removed — the steps still get the person across, but now you see every one of them and how heavy each one is. English then lends that picture out, to the way a person treats others and to the shape of a building.

可以想成一個舞者走過舞台:每一步都接著下一步,看不出一點用力。那份輕鬆就是 grace。graceless 可以想成更多收起可以想成一個舞者走過舞台:每一步都接著下一步,看不出一點用力。那份輕鬆就是 grace。graceless 可以想成同一個畫面,把那份輕鬆抽掉——腳還是會把人帶到對面,可是你現在看得見每一步,也看得見每一步有多重。英文接著把這張圖借出去用:借給一個人待人的樣子,也借給一棟建築的形狀。所以不管講的是動作、態度還是外形,說的都是同一件事:那份本來會讓人覺得舒服的輕巧,不在了。

From the word’s history

Wiktionary gives Middle English graceles, equivalent to grace plus -less. The word has always been simply grace with the grace taken out; what changes between the senses is which kind of grace is missing.

Wiktionary 記的是中古英文 graceles,等於 grace 加上 -less。這個字從頭到尾就是「grace 被拿掉」。各個意思之間變的不是結構,而是被拿掉的是哪一種 grace。

Wiktionary entry for graceless (kaikki:3f6f69a190036ae4:827109627:6283)

Three branches

看起來沒有輕巧感

這一組直接站在核心畫面上:先是動作沒有流暢感,再把同樣的眼光移到不會動的東西上。

adjective · C1

Moving or doing something in a heavy, awkward way, with none of the smoothness that makes a movement look easy.

笨拙不優雅

待人沒有大方

英文的 grace 除了動作的輕巧,也有待人的好意。這一組拿掉的是後面那一層:場面需要一點大方,那點大方沒有出現。

adjective · C1

Behaving in a rude, ungrateful way, especially towards someone who has been kind to you, or towards someone who has just beaten you fairly.

沒風度

沒有神的恩典

這一組要換一張圖才說得通:宗教英文裡的 grace 不是動作,也不是風度,而是神給的東西。把它硬掛回舞者的畫面會失真,所以另外給它一張圖。

adjective · C2

Without the grace of God: used in older religious writing about a person who is seen as wicked, or as living outside God's help.

沒有神恩的